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Frank E Gibbard Site Admin


Gender:  Age: 62 Joined: 20 Jul 2005 Posts: 2383 Location: London England
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:10 am Post subject: A Warm Welcome Guaranteed (An All Hallows Eve Tale) |
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I saw in the distance the dark castellated towers,
this prospect uplifted my rapidly petering powers.
My tramp had been a cold tiring protracted slog,
in my mind’s eye I envisaged a gaily flaming log.
A far-off window light imbued a welcoming shine,
a mile more endured and its haven would be mine.
Mirage-like I visualised the deepest cosiest chair,
could almost feel myself easing in to settle there.
A genial host and hostess to say welcome at the door
were comforts I reckoned that indubitably lay before.
As the path ascended how my vacant stomach ached
for a hunger to be sated and a dry thirst to be slaked.
Bid to come in by a servant, I soon relaxed pleasantly,
he said: “Please wait, the Count will be up, presently.
I will fetch you a cold collation of our leftover meat,
Lord Dracula will join you later, he says for you to eat.”
(End or a new beginning?)
Last edited by Frank E Gibbard on Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:42 am; edited 4 times in total |
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pughguy2 Keeper of the Faith

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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:20 am Post subject: |
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When Vlad says "EAT" .. guess yah best chow down.
Always enjoy your stuff Frank. It's usually about something no one else Writes about. What I'm tryin to say is, it's fresh and new (mostly) K ? |
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Frank E Gibbard Site Admin


Gender:  Age: 62 Joined: 20 Jul 2005 Posts: 2383 Location: London England
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Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 5:25 am Post subject: |
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| You are an assiduous respondent Mike. Well appreciated by me here. THANKS - Frank |
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nia Poster Extraordinaire


Gender:  Age: 53 Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 5490 Location: Poetry Land of the Universe
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:23 pm Post subject: Re: A Warm Welcome Guaranteed (An All Hallows Eve Tale) |
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| Frank E Gibbard wrote: |
I saw in the distance the dark castellated towers,
this prospect uplifted my rapidly petering powers.
My tramp had been a cold tiring protracted slog,
in my mind’s eye I envisaged a gaily flaming log.
A far-off window light imbued a welcoming shine,
a mile more endured and its haven would be mine.
Mirage-like I visualised the deepest cosiest chair,
could almost feel myself easing in to settle there.
A genial host and hostess to say welcome at the door
were comforts I reckoned that indubitably lay before.
As the path ascended how my vacant stomach ached
for a hunger to be sated and a dry thirst to be slaked.
Bid to come in by a servant, I soon relaxed pleasantly,
he said: “Please wait, the Count will be up, presently.
I will fetch you a cold collation of our leftover meat,
Lord Dracula will join you later, he says for you to eat.”
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I missed your poetical touches and humour dear Frank It was nice to read you again, as always my older eyes can't read easily so I made some breaks for these lines Well expressed,
I hope you had a nice Halloween Day,
Thank you,
with my love,
nia |
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budnging True Believer

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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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This is really fun to read. Thanks for sharing. _________________ love lies bleeding on the floor... |
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Frank E Gibbard Site Admin


Gender:  Age: 62 Joined: 20 Jul 2005 Posts: 2383 Location: London England
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:38 am Post subject: Re: A Warm Welcome Guaranteed (An All Hallows Eve Tale) |
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| nia wrote: | It was nice to read you again, as always my older eyes can't read easily so I made some breaks for these lines Well expressed,
I hope you had a nice Halloween Day,
Thank you,
with my love,
nia |
Thanks Nia. I take your point about reading close type. I could have double-spaced for easier reading. I never thought.
I have edited it into a large text font.
Love, Frank. |
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nia Poster Extraordinaire


Gender:  Age: 53 Joined: 16 May 2005 Posts: 5490 Location: Poetry Land of the Universe
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Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:39 am Post subject: |
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Ah, Frank I am getting older... you know I am 100 years old.
Thank you dear, how are you, is everything fine?
Have a nice day,
with my love,
nia |
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