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nia · Last edited by nia on Sat Nov 04, 2006 12:32 am; edited 1 time in total

HAIKU CORNER/ writing together

This is an idea of me, and I don’t know what you will say and think about this. But I want to bring some activities for haiku poems. I will write a haiku and I will give a number for this. Then anyone can go on to write his/her haiku poem by giving the next number… So this thread will be non-stop Haiku Corner, I hope we get enjoy and bring some beautiful winds of Haiku world… Good Luck and have enjoyable times…

Notes:
. remembering, the syllables should be 5 - 7 – 5, I mean
first line should be 5 syllables
second…. 7 syllables
third one… 5 syllables

. it can be some mistakes especially counting the syllables, I have problem with pronounce, so please let me know.

. you can ask that is it necessary to obey these numbers… for me it is not important just feeling the haiku spirit… but on the other hand it is a kind of game to find the words in these syllables so I prefer to count them. )

. and I don’t know should we make clear how many haiku poems can we post in a thread… any idea for this?

with my love,
nia

nia · Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 12:27 am Post subject:

Peru- Dragon Temple, photo taken by Hayley Walker
http://www.travelblog.org/Photos/339223.html

1)

Still carves my heart
as being there years and years
in dragon temple

03 November, 06

with my love,
nia

aleksandra · Guest

so good thread Nia, but I'm not good on this Very Happy

but I like to read haiku poems
And Nia this is good one

Aleksandra

nia · Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:39 pm Post subject:

Thank you so much Aleksandra, I am sure you can do, it is enjoyable,

and My Dear Moderators, I hope I didn't make wrong by opening and posting in this page this thread, I didn't think this before, I mean it can be wrong place.... I would be glad to hear your thoughts.

have a nice and smiling day,
with my love,
nia

nia · Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:27 pm Post subject:

Thank you my dear moderators,

I hope, you all like and join this corner with your haiku poems,

with my love,
nia

nia · Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 11:31 pm Post subject:

any hearty word is a small rose, lives forever
in your heart

2)
Yann tiersen “La valse d’amelie”

Hide for me all stars
Be forever, never stop
Nights follow the sun

3)
http://shirleycason.com/newagemusiccd.html

In endless white snow
looking for the footsteps
flapping the snow birds

4)
http://www.tibet.com/audio/
Prayer For Truth

Deeply touches depth thoughts
So many doors for to rise
But you only die once

note:Animated roses by Mary (Garren) Morand
http://sofinesjoyfulmoments.com/animated/!roses3.htm

with my love,
nia

Laramie · Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:33 pm Post subject:

5 (By the way, I loved the title for this.. Haiku corner!! And I'm not so great at Haikus but I figured I would give it a try... Very Happy

)

Shadows falling soft
Voices calling in the night
Gray ships sail far
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"The opposite of war isn't peace, it's creation!"- RENT

nia · Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:38 pm Post subject:

nia · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 8:08 am Post subject:

6)

in a water drop
there is a very big world
that we can not see

with my love,
nia

Laramie · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:36 am Post subject:

*gasp!!* I loved that one!!! Very Happy

It reminds me of How The Grinch Stole Christmas since they all lived in a snowflake... Very Happy

Ode to Kitty

Cute kitty naps
Lying on my bed so soft
She is chasing mice
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"The opposite of war isn't peace, it's creation!"- RENT

nia · Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:13 am Post subject:

nia · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:28 am Post subject:

9)

sun rises in words
but you have already seen
in your greatest heart

with my love,
nia

Sher · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:27 pm Post subject:

beautiful nia.

the kindest heart feels
pains of never letting go
of love that holds us
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The effort to understand the universe is one of the very few things that lifts human life a little above the level of farce, and gives it some of the grace of tragedy.

nia · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:42 pm Post subject:

Sher · Posted: Thu Nov 16, 2006 4:45 pm Post subject:

always smiling he
makes us laugh with such ease
where is our MP!?
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The effort to understand the universe is one of the very few things that lifts human life a little above the level of farce, and gives it some of the grace of tragedy.